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Breakfast, just toast, no time for anything fancy
But with a spread of chocolate, guilty pleasure
A glass of milk, no time for tea
But good enough as looking over the morning paper
Always start the day with a good morning

Crunch the toast like he crunches numbers
Gulps down the milk and puts away the paper
Picks up his case, had to do a runner
Catch a taxi, killer day ahead.
Time is money, things to buy, things to sell
And like his mother always said
Always start the day with a good morning
This is my late entry to the :iconliterarypublications: Winter event. My original work was lost so I had to redo it, it's been a real faf about but I rather like the concept I came up with here. The image belongs to :iconfoofoo871: so check out their DA page.

This is a part one of two poem, it's a compare and contrast idea.
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Dany1908 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
something light and describing a normal and hasty morning
something new beside dark poems which been in the contest so far
simple words, easy to understand and good flow
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks very much, it was a little tricky keeping within the limit
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Dany1908 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh that i know well hehe 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Writer
yeah
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