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Breakfast, just toast, no time for anything fancy
But with a spread of chocolate, guilty pleasure
A glass of milk, no time for tea
But good enough as looking over the morning paper
Always start the day with a good morning

Crunch the toast, sounds almost like bone
Gulps down the milk and puts away the paper
Picks up his case, get’s his head in the zone
Catch a taxi, killer day ahead.
Time is money, always new people to meet
And like his mother always said
Always start the day with a good morning
This is my late entry to the :iconliterarypublications: Winter event. My original work was lost so I had to redo it, it's been a real faf about but I rather like the concept I came up with here. The image belongs to :iconfoofoo871: so check out their DA page.

This is a part two of two poems, it's a compare and contrast idea.
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dreammaker123 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
this is a very interesting poem you have typed up here, I cant relate to this for my mother says this every time. The choice of words are quite beautiful I must say, you gave a good connection with words of wisdom very lovely. Overall you did an excellent job on creating this I enjoyed reading it, keep of the good work
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you kindly
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dreammaker123 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
your welcome
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xfoxfirex Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't this the same as your part one? o-0
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Writer
No you will notice subtle differences to suggest difference in vocations
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xfoxfirex Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah. I shouldn't be on here drunk. lol
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah given some of the art you can find on here that could really mess with your head....even when you're sober
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