I really like the coloring you've done here, especially the shadowing. You've given it just the right amount of shading and off coloring to give all the fabric on each character real depth and texture. I also like the shadows on the faces of the characters, especially Jack's My one and only critique is the shadows aren't quite even on all the characters - Jack's is on the right side of his face, which is understandable considering his position but Lizzie's face is also turned but it isn't quite as pronounced. There are definitely shadows but I think you could've gone a shade darker, even with her paler skin.
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