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Fox-E27 Oracle File--READ-THE-DESCRIPTION by Foxy-Knight Fox-E27 Oracle File--READ-THE-DESCRIPTION by Foxy-Knight
Oracle has herself a new operative, now that Jack Dahl has settled in nicely in his civilian guise and has taken in little Lizzie as his own it's time to get to the real work. And Oh boy does he have his work cut out for him, Black Mask gone to ground, a sibling rivalry which plays out as an assassin war and one side is particularly interested in the warrior whom escaped the Mercenary King. Fox is gonna need to use all his cunning, skill and support from his bro4life Ronin (see :icondkalban: for more details) and the Black Bat if he hopes to survive long enough to make his claim in the Earth 27!  

Huge thanks to both :iconroysovitch: and :iconphil-cho: for making Fox a part of the Earth-27 DC universe. If you wanna find out more you can check out :iconroysovitch: on his main page and check out the club here --> :iconearth-27: and if you can please support Roy and Earth 27 see this link for details www.deviantart.com/users/outgo…


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Oracle Files - Fox by Roysovitch and only use this image for critiques which you can then link to the artist.
Fox/Jack Dahl belongs to me
Earth 27 is the brainchild of :iconroysovitch:
Art done by the magnificent :iconphil-cho:
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Alright! Back to the Fox character.

The art is magnificent, as always from Phil-Cho. It captures wonderfully the character you have created, and from what I know about him, not a thing is off. I especially like the look of his swords. Another design aspect that I have liked about your character from when I first found him and met you a few months ago is the mask. In this piece, it is expanded upon, and I find enjoyment in the longer ears.

Secondly, his interactions with the other characters are spot on, and come to the best degree of realism from each character. I especially like the conversation between Fox and Ronin(Best buds).

His backstory was flawless to the original, and all in all, I love this piece.
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KryativeLotus Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey there this constructive comment is brought to you by ProjectComment!

I guess I'll start off with the art, it's a lovely drawing, and I think you portrayed the personality very well with the smile and eyes. The hint of hair in the back is a really interesting piece to add as far as I know most of the DC Men don't have long hair, so it's very unique when it comes to physicalities. As for the shading and lighting goes, it's really well done, especially merging in with the background like one of those real identity files you see in the movies XD

Now for the writing, I would like to start by mentioning the top right box, I'm assuming it is dialogue from an RP session, but it's too hard to read and a little overwhelming to the reader at first glance. The backstory is rather unique and I applaud you on that, although I haven't read many DC OCs I can really see you put a lot of thought into the process of making this OC!
I could however, try to minimize the flowery writing, as most files go, they are straight to the point and very abrupt, which helps shorten text and people can read them at a glance.

Amazing job and I plan on reading the next few ones as well! Keep up the amazing work! :heart: :hug:
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Student Writer
The art was done by Phil-Cho and the file was done by Roysovitch, and the RP text is actually a radio chatter recording. Sort of mission details if you like. As for flowery writing this is written from the perspective of the character Barbara Gordon aka Oracle so it's not so much like most files, hence why she can be more subjective in her remarks (they are her personal files after all).

Do pass your good comments onto the respective artists, their links are in the art description and thank you for the comment
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KryativeLotus Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I most certainly will! ^_^
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016  Student Writer
Good show, may I say what parts of this bio appealed to you? What did you make of the Fox character?
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:iconkryativelotus:
KryativeLotus Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally enjoy the fact that he was very much an ordinary man and adopted a child, that was nice. And the fact that he was an object of two rival groups, that's very interesting
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Student Writer
Well he's not exactly an ordinary man, well he is a normal human but is capable of extraordinary things
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KryativeLotus Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Well certainly!
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Student Writer
I like badass normals
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karapoo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Very interesting! A little much to read... But overall I love everything about it!
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Writer
You may wanna check out the rest and maybe read the stories
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:iconkarapoo:
karapoo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
very well c:
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Writer
and if you like drop a critique
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:iconkarapoo:
karapoo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh, I definitely would, except I've never done it before, and I don't really know how ;-; However, I will watch you and give you a llama c:
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you very much, and a critique is pretty straight forward, say what you thought, what you liked and what you felt could be better
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:iconkarapoo:
karapoo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, critiques are very constructive and helpful. I might give it a try.
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Writer
Good show
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:iconrinalpha:
Rinalpha Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016
Interresting
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Student Writer
Any best bits that worked for you?
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amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
A well-crafted character all around. Not over-powered. Not a Gary Stu. Interesting personality, intriguing background. Entertaining. Generally just a joy to read about, even in his crazier or darker moments. I get excited when I see his pictures in the VOXs, because I know it's going to be interesting. Fantastic work.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you very much, no this guy isn't perfect...he gets hurt a lot, bleeds a lot, takes a LOT of pain...but he doesn't let that stop him. He ain't a jedi, he ain't a boy scout and whether or not he's a hero...that's down to you but he's a warrior baby!
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amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Being a Jedi is overrated. Have you read their guidelines? Monks, priests, and nuns have more freedom! Not to mention that it was all mucked up back in yesteryear when one Jedi council member decided to go super conservative with it-- Wait. That has no bearing on the current conversation... And has probably been retconned out of the current continuity... 

He has the makings of a true hero. Or at least a true anti-hero, which is just as good. :D
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
I'd say modern hero, his morality is gray as he does abide working with Catwoman, even willingly suggests they steal stuff together but the victims are always eviler than thou and a good portion of the cash goes to charity. So modern hero seems about right
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amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Modern hero works :)
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
plus Fox is more mandalorian than Jedi, those are the warriors that gave us Jango and Boba fett...and they killed jedi with their bare hands...just think about that for a moment

the star wars badass normals with gadgets and jetpacks vs magical lasersword wielding monks whom can summon the power of the universe to own you...and the badass normals kill them with their bare hands...
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amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Mandalorians FTW. The Force is cool and all, but the Jedi and Sith always seem to rely way too heavily on it. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
Indeed, also this may amuse you, Mandalorians regard Jedi as worthy opponents...but they have nothing to say on the sith. In the Mandalorian eyes...Jedi are better opponents than the sith...ouch
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AmbergrisElement Featured By Owner May 14, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
It´s a very cool character design,I also appreciate the work you put into the background story.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Writer
You may like the stories I have planned to right about this character then
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:iconmt8flw:
mt8flw Featured By Owner May 3, 2016   Artist
...very interesting.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Writer
Oh it'll get more interesting the more characters I get into the E27, Psychic and Russell will follow suit and when I get to the villains...oh boy
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mt8flw Featured By Owner May 4, 2016   Artist
LOL I was meaning seeing a Idea you proposed to me happening from another group you roll with, who was the May queen?
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Writer
The May Queen?
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:iconmt8flw:
mt8flw Featured By Owner May 4, 2016   Artist
Oh I take it you only celebrate the day for the Communist Holiday. Happy workers day.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Writer
Can you explain what you mean? 
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mt8flw Featured By Owner May 4, 2016   Artist
The first Monday of May was originally a Socialist Holiday celebrating workers. The first day of May was Originally a Pagan holiday for spring. It is Important to deduce if they worship Paper or Imaginary powers. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 4, 2016  Student Writer
I see, I'm not really knowledgeable on such things or maybe I don't care why I have a day off
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool. I like this profile too. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Student Writer
Thanks, ming-ming-ming is a staple on his character
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. Lol. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Writer
Mandalorian warrior like tendencies, cunning as hell and quite a good father figure
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, I see. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Student Writer
Lizzie will be coming soon so look out for her
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Alrighty then. 
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